By request.

Sep. 3rd, 2003 03:36 pm
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My first ever attempt at erotica. It has some editing issues. but have at it.



I knocked on the door a couple of times and waited as patiently as I could. You sounded so sexy on the phone, and I'd never heard those words come out of your mouth before. Somehow, your low sultry voice sounded even better when you described what you planned to do to me. I checked myself three, four more times while I waited for you to come to the door. Finally, it opened. I was vaguely disappointed by what you were wearing....still dressed from work, a very conservative skirt suit. I walked into your place....you have such great taste in art and furniture; I walked around and had to touch almost everything.

"Stop appreciating the place, and appreciate me for a sec, sailor".

I turned on my heel, to see you there with a bottle of champagne and two glasses. You handled the top and cork with aplomb. Truly impressive, I remember thinking. You poured us both a glass of bubbly, and we drank it down while we gazed in each other's eyes, and then drank in each other's bodies. I put down my glass, and grabbed you around the waist. That seductive smile...it just dared me to try something. Anything. So I did. The kiss seemed to last hours, even though I knew it was only about thirty seconds or so. I was perversely pleased that you were all flushed and out of breath. It's nice to know you have that kind of effect on someone. You unbuttoned your suit jacket, and I could see your glorious nipples print against the cotton of your blouse. This time, you came to me, clasping the back of my neck in your hands, kissing me on the mouth. I broke the kiss, looking you in the eyes, and then kissing down your neck to the hollow of your collarbone. Although partially blocked by your body, I could hear your low moans and sighs as I continued to kiss the sensitive parts of your neck. We slumped into one of the nice wide loveseats in your living room, where I continued to kiss your neck. Feeling adventurous, my hands roamed under your blouse, teasing your nipples between my thumb and forefingers, hearing you gasp in delight. I hurriedly withdrew and unbuttoned your blouse, seeing your flat stomach, then watching those lovely breasts appear. At this point, I realized how badly my cock was throbbing, and that it was in such desperate need of loving attention. I pulled off my pants, and watched with delight as one of your hands disappeared under your skirt, the other giving one of those cherry red nipples some attention as well. I stopped for a second, just to appreciate the scene. The flush from your arousal was spreading, and had almost reached your cleavage. All I can say is, victoria's a good friend of mine. I came back to the love seat and removed your hand from under your skirt. Together, we unbuckled it, revealing your lovely hips and thighs, and of course a pair of blue satin bikinis. With a lovely little wet spot that was growing by the second. I hooked my fingers and thumbs under the waistband, removing them slowly, revealing a lovely trimmed mound, and pretty pink labia that I wanted to lick, suck, and toy with for hours. I knelt in front of the chair, it was like worshipping some elder fertility goddess....except no goddess ever was moaning, playing with your own nipples, and asking me in no uncertain terms to eat you out, right now. I lowered my mouth to your lips, spreading them with two fingers, and laving the entire area top to bottom with the fat part of his tongue, and giving your clit a little kiss when he got to the top. I was happy that I had parted your thighs with the other hand, because she nearly took his head off with your thighs, thrashing as he continued to attend to your pussy, kissing and sucking each of your labia, and then inserting a finger, gently fingering your, searching for your g spot, and was rewarded with some more girl juice, and I lapped it up. You tasted so good. Kind of like salty, tangy, but sweet too. I wanted more, so I licked at your clit, and crooked my middle finger to find your g spot again. Your back arched, and you almost screamed my windows out of their sashes. There was more juice than I could swallow that spurted out onto my hand and face. We laid there for a minute, me enjoying the taste of you, you just kind of basking in what seemed to me like a great orgasm. I looked you in the face, and you just smiled that "oh, it's your turn smile" that I've come to enjoy. We kissed again, and for some reason, I've found it's such a turn on when you don't give a damn that it's your cum you're tasting on my lips. It's transgressive and hot as all hell. Hot. Don't ask me how, but I had forgotten how hard I was until right then, when you grabbed me by my now rock hard cock, and sat me down by it. Your pink tongue darted out of your mouth to lick the purple head, then dawdled its way all the way down to the base, resting for a minute on my balls, taking one, then the other in your mouth. I took a deep breath then, because if you continued right then, I was coming. All over your back, and we couldn't have that. Not at all. You returned to the head, taking it into your mouth, and licking, sucking, and otherwise stimulating the most sensitive part of my cock. While you did that, you just drove me insane by running your nails alone that little bit of skin between my balls and my anus. Drives me nuts, I arched my back just then, and even with my cock in your mouth, I could hear you chuckling. Up and down, taking the whole shaft in your mouth?oh god, the feeling of your tongue against the underside of my head, and your eyes never left mine that whole time. They said "Come on now. Come in my mouth. It's so good. I want it. I'll swallow every drop." It would have been so comical, with your cheeks all sucked in, if it didn't feel so damned good. "Oh shit?ohfuck ohfuck ohfuck ohfuck ohfuck ohfuck oh MY GOD I'M CUMMING RIGHT NOW!" I screamed. I spewed what must have been a pint of white hot goo into your mouth, which you took right into your mouth. You motioned to me to come down to you, which was only fair. You tasted yourself, and I'd taste me. I kissed you full on the lips, tasting the faintly bleachy taste of my cum. You backed off, and swallowed it down. I've never understood why, but there's something so naughty and nasty and sexy about a girl who swallows. And somehow, I was hard again in seconds. I sat back on the loveseat, and brought you to me. We grabbed the condom, must be safe, even though we are monogamous, things do happen. I love how you put it on me?.put the condom in your mouth, and just push it down my cock like you're deep throating me again. Not that I needed any help, but my dick was standing firmly at attention. We maneuvered ourselves in such a way that you were sitting on my cock, staring straight into my eyes, legs gathered beneath ourselves. You were so wet, we slipped together like one form, no resistance, even though the fit was nice and snug. I moved my pelvis, hard cock moving in and out, establishing a nice slow rhythm, rubbing up on your swollen up clit, listening to your breathing increase in pace. This stopped being making love a long time ago, this was a great fuck in progress. Your lovely breasts were jiggling softly in front of my eyes, so I took the left nipple in my mouth and gently twisted the right one, registering a gasp, and an increase in the speed of our fucking. I grabbed your ass, and pulled you towards me, pulling myself deeper, and somehow getting harder because I heard you start talking. I'd never heard you talk dirty during sex before, it was like a dam had broken. "Oh fuck me?fuck me harder, suck my nipples, oh god I'm close, I'm going to cum?." And then, you just screamed, this inchoate howl of absolute ecstasy. Your entire upper half was red and flushed, sweating, and we continued to fuck, bucking up and down, your back arched but staying close so I could still suck on those red ripe strawberries that sat atop your breasts?oh god, and I felt that feeling rising from deep in my crotch. We quickened our pace some more, there was no difference between your pussy and my dick, we were one fucking unit, pumping harder and harder, and you started to scream again, this time carving dark red furrows in my shoulder, and then I started to scream too, because I came right then, deep in you. We stopped right then. The loveseat was soaked, smelling of jizz and girl juice. You sighed. "Another job for the furniture cleaners. Let's take a shower." I smiled.

Date: 2003-09-03 12:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] trueromance78.livejournal.com
Uhh... that tag is messed up. ;)

Date: 2003-09-03 12:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lwoodbloo.livejournal.com
I fixed it. Now enjoy the damned story.

Date: 2003-09-03 12:52 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] violetshade.livejournal.com
Did I miss something with all the person-changing when the main character was eating out the woman? Other than that and the personal bit that I'm not a huge fan of first person writing, it's reasonably good. Some people might call you on the short time between orgasms for the guy, but I know that some guys can do it :)

Date: 2003-09-03 12:53 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lwoodbloo.livejournal.com
That would be my editing problem.

And you don't like porn, so your opinion may suck my toesies. ;)

Date: 2003-09-03 01:42 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elordais.livejournal.com
Erotica aside, what happened to that magazine article you did a few months ago?

Date: 2003-09-03 01:54 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lwoodbloo.livejournal.com
Magazine article?

Date: 2003-09-03 02:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] queenofennui.livejournal.com
Yummy. You are yummy. Now, where's MY story that was promised???

Date: 2003-09-03 03:23 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elordais.livejournal.com
Hmm...you said a while ago that you wrote something and it was gonna be published...i thought it was for a magazine?

Cheater.

Date: 2003-09-03 10:13 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjendifi.livejournal.com
I liked it when you sent it to me over a year ago, too. :)

rar!

Re: Cheater.

Date: 2003-09-04 06:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lwoodbloo.livejournal.com
I never said I didn't send it to anyone else. ;-)

Date: 2003-09-04 12:38 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] philthy-fove.livejournal.com
Do you think you can make me part of that feels_so_good community?

Re: Cheater.

Date: 2003-09-04 05:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ladyjendifi.livejournal.com
I don't care about the others, sugar. All I care about is that I got it. ;)
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